week 8 - The soccer warrior

I choice this because I enjoyed writing it.

We were learning to make a narrative.

The soccer warrior

I wake up and see my roof of my bedroom I sniff the fresh air. I get

up and hop out of bed, put some clothes on. I go out and make

some milo and weetbix. Then, I finished and turn on TV. Brayden and Oscar come over to my house and we watch TV for a while. Suddenly there was breaking news. It said, “the golden soccer ball has been stolen. Police are talking to the mayor right now there is a reward of $1000 for who ever finds the ball.”Then we went to my room and heard something. Then we had a idea. We ran to Taylor the builder’s shop and got him to build a soccer suit for all of us. From out of nowhere, Ronaldo walks in to the shop. We go up to him and ask him to help us find the golden soccer ball. He says, “yes” and orders a soccer suit too.

“Coming right up,” said Taylor.

Then Taylor was finished making the suits we all put them on and read the instructions. then we all ran out the door. To the museum of soccer to look for the ball. When we got there, we were about to get inside when a security guard stopped us.

“What do you think you're doing?” Said the guard. Then Ronaldo said “come on, do you want to have the golden soccer ball or not?”

“OK!” he said with a grunt then walked off.

Then we walk into museum of soccer. then we get to the spot of the crime. We put our glasses on and scan for fingerprints or foot prints. We find some and follow them to a house that was wreck and the door was left open we went inside. Then the footsteps stop and we found a hole in the floor. I put my finger in the hole and pull it up revealing a trap door to a laboratory. We walk forward checking for boobytraps. Just then our glasses ran out of charge. “Great!” we all said being sarcastically. Then Oscar found a camera and drew on a piece of paper so it looked exactly like what it looked like. It would have seen before then stuck it to the screen. Then we see a guy walking. We sneak towards him and he's holding the golden soccer ball. Brayden popped a soccer ball bomb and kicked it at him, but just misses. Then the guy started to run. He yelled “ROBOT’S ATTACK!” Then bad soccer ninjas fall from the roof. Then we all pop out soccer ball bombs and start kicking and then dropping more. Then they all fell down dead. We ran past and saw the guy in a laboratory. “What do you want with the golden soccer ball?” I yell not thinking.

He turned around and stared at us.

“The ball has the power of soccer and I want it,” he said and then pulled out a gun and started to shoot at us.

Ronaldo pulled out a taser gun and shoots at him. then the guy fall down. Ranaldo chucks the guy over his shoulder and I take the golden soccer ball and we run out. and then we go to the police station and we hand the guy in and give him the soccer ball and take our reward. Then we split the reward and go home. I put my suit in my cardboard and go downstairs to watch TV.