Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Thursday, November 12, 2015

News article

I am blogging this because I enjoyed writing it. This is a different type of writing to what I usually do.







Tanki match of the best


When it was boxing day at 4.30 pm at Stadium there was a tanki match to see who's the best. Jfab2004 goes into his garage and changes into hammer and hornet. Jfab2004 get out of his garage. He drives down the ramp and shot Mrchick1 from the behind he flips with all the force. Boom! He exploded. “Shot” said Mrchick1.


Mrchick1 went to his garage and change to mammoth and shaft. He drives up into a high spot and started to aim he saw Jfab2004 bang! He shot Jfab2004 but he did not  explode then he shot Jfab2004. Boom he exploded. Jfab2004 respawned and found himself that he had spawned right beside Mrchick1 he shot and shot then reloaded shot again then Mrchick1 turn his gun, he shot Jfab2004 and then Jfab2004 had his last shot before he reloaded he shot. Bang! Mrchick1 blew up “no” he yelled “I will get you Jfab for this”.
Mrchick1 respawned he drove up to the highest spot he started to aim then Jfab hided from Mrchick1 aimer. Then Jfab sneak up and shot Mrchick1, Mrchick1 turned his gun to aim at jfab Mrchick1 shot Jfab and Jfab exploded and went to respawn.

When Jfab respawn Mrchick1 was already aiming for him Bang! He shot Jfab Jfab had to drive to find a fix box when Jfab got one fix box. Jfab drove and found Mrchick1 he started shooting Mrchick1 then Mrchick1 exploded then the battle had ended. Then the battle was abandoned.

Friday, October 16, 2015

Character Description

I am blogging this because I enjoyed writing this. I am proud of this because it is an interesting piece of writing. I especially like the start.
WALT choose words that give the reader a vivid picture in their head 
Ethan
Physical Description
Character Traits
Actions
Twinkly eyes which glint.
A little bit of devious  
Like wearing jackets
Blue eyes
Kind
Generous
Active
Supportive
Clumsy
cute
strong
Says hello to everybody.
Always smiles.
trips over a lot
plays on motorbike (Not real)


P7310002.JPGWALT choose words that give the reader a vivid picture in their head
Purpose: To Entertain
Text Type: Character Description
My Writing Goal: Use paragraphs accurately.
Success Criteria:
  • Shows physical description
  • Shows character traits and actions
  • Organised into correct sentences and paragraphs - intro / physical / traits / actions / ending
  • Strong nouns, verbs and adjectives
  • Uses a good simile and can use other language features effectively
  • Has an entertaining anecdote (little story that happened) about the character

Ethan


Ethan’s blue eyes twinkle with a bit of deviousness. He wears jackets quite a lot.


When he walks around he will trip over and not cry. He is the Cutest of cute. He is a great friend when you are crying he will come and give you a big hug. He likes running around. He is generous because once he gave me a lollie. He comes to my cricket games and cheers me on.


He plays on his motor bike (not real) and likes trying to do wheelies. He does not watch where he is going and that leads to him falling over but still not crying. He likes saying “Hi” to everyone and gives a big smile.

My cousin is one of a kind. It’s fun to have a cousin like him.

by James

Monday, June 22, 2015

Tāwhirimātea w9

I chose this because I like making movies.

We were learning to retell a story.

Tāwhirimātea (Pronunciation)

Tāwhirimātea lived between the embrace of Ranginui and Papatūānuku as did the other children of his whānau. He liked living close to his parents. He could talk to his mother, and get advice from his father when he needed to. Tāwhirimātea didn't mind the difficulties of living in continual darkness, or that space was so confined that he and the rest of his siblings had to crawl to get around. But the other children had had enough.
Tāwhirimātea 1
A meeting was called and the majority of the children decided that their parents had to be separated.
Tūmātauenga addressed them, "Once they feel the blows of my patu they will soon loosen their grip and we'll finally be free to walk upright and greet Tamanuiterā, the sun."
Tāwhirimātea disagreed."How dare you! How dare you think of hurting our parents in such a way. They fed you, nurtured and raised you, and now you reward them with this?"
The children bowed their heads in shame, but Tūmatauenga stood his ground.
Tāwhirimātea 2
"We have asked them to separate, we have pleaded with them to let us see the light, but do they listen? No, this is the only way!"
Tūmātauenga raised his patu to strike at his parents but Tāwhirimātea was on him in a flash. Grappling in the dark they struggled, until finally Tāne Mahuta pleaded for quiet.
"Stop! Fighting will not resolve our problem, we have agreed that we cannot continue to live this way. I'm sorry Tāwhiri but separating our parents has been agreed upon by the majority of us. With the gentle push of my arms, and without hurting them, I will push our parents apart."
Tāwhirimātea 3
The others agreed, but Tāwhirimātea refused to support what he didn't believe was right. Firstly Tāne Mahuta braced his legs on Papatūānuku and pushed Ranginui with his arms. He used all his strength, but without success.
"You cannot separate them," said Tāwhirimātea. "Give it up, they are meant to be together!"
But Tāne Mahuta wasn't finished. He lay on his back, pulled his legs to his chest then pushed from below. Slowly he pushed, but still nothing happened. Again he pushed, using all his strength, but nothing happened. He took a breath and pushed once more. Releasing his breath, and taking another, he pushed again, a new surge of strength pumping through his body. And at last there was movement.
Tāwhirimātea roared with fury, "No!"
But it was too late. Ranginui and Papatūānuku were forced apart, and light filled the world. The brothers lay in shocked silence covering their eyes from the brightness of Tamanuiterā shining down on their cowering bodies.
Tāwhirimātea was first to jump to his feet, lashing out at the others in anger. "I will never let you rest for what you have done, even your children won't be safe from my clutches! This will be my domain forever and you will always feel my wrath," he called to the other children, and he flew up to join his father.
As time passed animals, plants and people grew in the light of the sun. The mokopuna of Ranginui and Papatūānuku populated the world.
Tāwhirimātea kept his promise living in the realm of his father, the sky. He became the guardian of the winds, Ngā hau e whā, and continues to be so to this day.
Sometimes Tāwhirimātea is content to listen to advice from his parents and forgive his siblings. On those days the weather is fine, clear and calm. But sometimes he is reminded of the pain his parents endured when they were separated, and the longing they still have for each other. On those days he sends tornadoes, hurricanes, and cyclones to hound the descendants of those that betrayed him.


WALT RETELL A STORY
(TASK ON NEXT PAGE)











WALT RETELL A STORY

  • Read the Māori legend, Tāwhirimātea.
  • Retell the story using a digital app - you must have all the main characters and events - list them below on the table:

Characters
Main Events
Tāwhirimātea
Māori
Tūmatauenga
Tāne Mahuta
Ranginui



The kids wanted to split their parents.

Pushes parents away from each other

On those days he sends tornadoes, hurricanes, and cyclones to hound the descendants of those that betrayed him.


Friday, May 29, 2015

Dear Adele

Dear Adele,


Thankyou for your help at camp when we were making the fudge. You were very helpful and nice. You helped us pack up at the end and you gave us some very helpful tips . Your part of the amazing race was my favourite.


It was fun eating the fudge. You were a good judge in the masterchef competition. The pancakes we made tasted so delicious and our burgers, we swallowed them whole!


I really appreciated you coming to camp because it would have been hard taking time off from your family. You were great at taking the photos of camp, and encouraging us with all of our activities.


Thanks again for coming and helping at camp you were very nice and helpful.


Kind regards
James Brown.

Thursday, April 30, 2015

Menu

Menu writing with Mr Moriarty
Creating a scrumptious, professional sounding menu to treat your family.
Writing Purpose: to inform the reader
WALT choose words and phrases appropriate to the topic
Success Criteria:
  • Introduce your menu to your audience (who’s eating it)
  • Precise nouns e.g. cheesecake, bacon burger, crayfish
  • Adjective phrases e.g. crumbly base which breaks apart / juicy, salty and sea-fresh flesh
  • Your menu must have a Starter (Entree), Mains and Dessert. It can have options to choose from, salads and special drinks
  • It must sound yummy!

Menu
Hello my name is chef James if you want fast food come here it so fast you eat it will be gone in seconds. Nothing budget.
Starters
Chips
Mini Apple pie
Information
Very salty long chip come with tomato sauce.
steamy apple put in crispy pastry.  
main
Triple Bacon and egg breakfast burger
BBQ pizza

Pie
Information
Bacon and eggs with BBQ in toasted buns.
Has ham, tomato sauce, BBQ sauce, pineapple, gooey cheese.
Mince and cheese pie in pastry comes with tomato sauce.
desert
brownie
Giant Pancakes

Giant lamington
Information
Rich brownie with whole lot chocolate sauce.
Big pancakes fill your plate come with ice cream chocolate flavor or vanilla flavor
Chocolate flavor or strawberry flavor with ice cream.
drinks
apple juice
chocolate milk
Pepsi
Information
Smashed up apples brought in wine glass.
Chocolate milk in wine glass.
In a can.

Monday, February 23, 2015

hoildays

I wait for our plane. Flight gate 4. Then it was called “Gate 4, plane to Auckland is boarding.” I ran to gate 4. When we hopped on the plane we got then we got lollies to protect your ears from the plane engines. My brother asked how much he was allowed the lady said could he could have all of them if he handed them all out to all the people on the plane. But … Nathan missed giving mum a lolly.

1 hour later

We landed in Auckland and we got picked up by Uncle Chris. We dropped by Carl's Jnr for dinner and then we went back to Uncle Chris’s house and then we went to bed.

The next day

We got up and played playstation 2 and then went shopping for a soccer ball for me. I got a chocolate bar and then went home.

A couple of days later

Yes! We’re going to go to Rainbows End. I thought to myself. When we went to Rainbows End, Nathan started to look a bit pale on the tenth ride. I really enjoyed Rainbows End.

Friday, February 20, 2015

Week Three: Adventure League part 1

Adventure League
The Adventure League
Enemies
Members: Kitty Face (Connor D), Flygon (Brayden S),  Phat Flyer (Taylor C) and Blue Sword (James B)
The Mad Scientist (Flygon
Bob The Fairy (Blue Swo
MUTANT-MUT (Kitty Face
Mr Doodle (Phat Flyer)
affiliations:
Kitty face: leader awesome
Phat Flyer: The Muscle aka: the Mugger for Villains
Blue sword: weapon expert and medic. Pet: hamster
Flygon co leader and fast flyer. Pet: Dog


             Chapter 1
                     
Once upon a time there was a awesome team called THE ADVENTURE LEAGUE, but they had a terrible secret they wanted no one to know THEY WERE
SUPERHEROES but the only thing more worse than that secret is how they got to be superheros. There was a mad scientist that was very evil. He punched our lights out so we were knocked out. He was taking tests on us and It was starting to tire us out. Suddenly a blur of blue and  yellow flew through the door the mystery man sliced the face of the scientist. the name of the blue and yellow hero was Blue Sword. we soon became a team called the Adventure League was born.
           Chapter 2
Soon After they became a team they released they needed a base. They found an abandoned pet shop and also found 4 pets that are injured. There was a cat, dog, snake and hamster. Then Kitty Face and Flygon went back to the scientists lab to make potions for the pets to become sidekicks. We found a book to make superhero potions for the pets. Kitty face made a potion for the cat to create bones and make walls and weapons out of them he called the cat bones named after his old pet. Kitty face runs back to the base to see what Blue Sword and Phat Flyer wants for their pets powers. When Kitty face left Flygon made a potion for his pet dog. He wanted strength, agility and can walk through anything but not the ground. Kitty face ran back and said “Phat flyer wants  this  for his pet snake’s powers!”. “Blue sword want this,   for his pet hamster powers!”. Phat flyer wanted his snake to turn invisible and mugger of villain villains and blue sword wanted his hamster to fly at the speed of light and laser eyes.
Once the pets powers were done they fixed up the pet shop and made it their base because they knew they would need it once their archenemy's arrived.

chapter 3.

The Adventure League were tired from a day of punching  criminal's faces off so they all took some food from the pantry and settled down in front of the TV when suddenly all their archenemy were on the screen including the mad scientist. “What do you want” kitty face yelled. “ We don’t want anything.” Said the mad scientist “but we have something,”. Suddenly a creepy little thing jumped up and looked at the screen. “What is that” he yelled. “That's my new experiment” said the mad scientist. “It’s called a l.i.d.”
“and what’s that meant to stand for said kitty face. It’s  stands Little Indestructible Dudes said the mad Scientist and we've got a lot of them.

To Be Continued…

        

Thursday, September 04, 2014

Production diary

WALT: record and share our thoughts. Text type: Diary\
Success Criteria
Self assessment
Buddy Assessment
Teacher Assessment
Introduce yourself and your role “Dear Diary...”



Honest thoughts and feelings at the time



Likes and dislikes

``

Expression / Personality (sounds like you)



Date plus optional title for each entry



Actions from practice and performance




Great examples here: Link
day 1
Dear Diary, let me introduce myself. My name is James and my role in the production is a shark So far room 18 and some of room 5 and 6 so we got told what we were yes I'm a shark I thought to myself. I look at my script great “we love watching the fighting amongst the human’s some of the tribes on the waka are fierce towards each others whereas than us sharks”.

Day 2
I got in my line for the sharks it when in this order me Traylan, Camron ,Israel, liam,Tyler,Rory,Camden. I sometimes need to slow down my lines and sometimes  a bit louder but I think I'm loud enough.

Day 3

Today I had to start moving around with talking at the same time. but then I got told I had to
keep my head facing the crowd. So I did that and then they said it was perfect .

Day 4

I’m starting to be creeped out about going on stage and performing in front of a whole lot of everyone's parents well most of them.

Day 5 27/8/1014

Today we had our first time on the stage with an actual ordinance the other part of school and tonight we are performed.

Day 6 3/9/14

Today I, played Israel too. His line “I don’t know what they're fighting about but… at least there leaving us alone.

Day 7 4/10/14

Today was our last night performing on stage. I’m kind of sad, 1st no more lollies, 2nd no more big stage.

The butt shakers by the sharks 

Wednesday, September 03, 2014

A Friend

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A friend helps you in a time of need.


When they invite you over you say yes.


A friend will help you when you need the help.


They will play soccer with you.


They will play tanki online with you.


They make stories with you.


They take you to A and E.


They play minecraft with you.


They turn on tv for you.


They laugh at your jokes even if they aren’t funny.


They help you with skills for sport.


They tell you good songs.


They give you stuff for free.


They give you shortcuts for your computer.


And tell you websites for cool stuff.


They let you borrow things.


They give you answers to questions you need the answers to.
That’s what a friend is!keepcalm.jpg