Tuesday, April 15, 2014

Broken




This device (phone) is broken.


Write about a time you broke something!


OR




Imagine that you broke your device or phone and describe how it happened.



WALT use different sentence starters and lengths.


To do this, I will try to:
  • Start sentences with different words
  • Start sentences with capital letters
  • Use other punctuation (check the ladder)
  • Show my feelings
  • Use my senses to describe
  • Include strong verbs


BROKEN
I sprinted down a big long hall in the mall, clutching my Uncle’s new phone in my right hand and some birthday wrapper in my left. I had to get it to my Uncle's house for his birthday. I sprinted home. When I got there I opened the door and ran inside. I jumped on my bed and started wrapping up the new phone. When I had got to his house, I came in the gate, opened the door, then the other door and tripped up  on to the wooden hardwood floor. Ouch! I said and hop up rubbing my head but the cell phone had dropped and SMASH!!!! The cell phone had cracked. 
“Great gotta buy another one.

Monday, March 24, 2014

Robot


This is my robot that I created in google drive. We read a book called robot challenge. We created and labelled our own robot. It was so fun. My robot works like this the brain  moves like a car.

Friday, March 14, 2014

My scene

WALT describe using the 5 sense
  • look
  • hear
  • taste
  • smell
  • feel or touch

My scene:A crocodile attacks a animal

I stay in the water making me look like a big log. I look around for a animal to eat, I heard a rustling behind a bush. I froze and waited for,I saw a head of a deer, I waited for a while then the deer jumped over a bush and started to have a drink of water,I got ready to jumped and then. I attack, I chew threw the meat yum blood stream out of the deer and onto my face. I did not care,I just wanted something to eat just then my teeth could go any deeper, I had came to the bone, I pull it out and chuck it away and started to eat when, I finished eating. I went back into the water and waited for another animal to have a drink.

Thursday, March 13, 2014

Waka art

My waka art

 This here is my waka art its part of a conoe what we are all in. Can you comment on this post.

Wednesday, March 12, 2014

Area and Perimeter

Area and perimeter


This is my work that,I did on  a website called a
maths dictionary.The link is at the bottom of the page. Area is in and perimeter is out. To me area is like inside the house and outside the perimeter house.
 http://www.amathsdictionaryforkids.com/dictionary.html

Friday, February 21, 2014

5 Ways I show PRIDE

5 Ways I show PRIDE


my learning buddy animal

My learning buddy animal

This here is my learning buddy animal, a Cheetah. I chose it because, I sometimes cheat in computer games and like their speed at running.

Tuesday, February 04, 2014

Name Art


This is my graffiti art for our tote trays you can make your own at www.Graffiticreator