Friday, October 16, 2015

Character Description

I am blogging this because I enjoyed writing this. I am proud of this because it is an interesting piece of writing. I especially like the start.
WALT choose words that give the reader a vivid picture in their head 
Physical Description
Character Traits
Twinkly eyes which glint.
A little bit of devious  
Like wearing jackets
Blue eyes
Says hello to everybody.
Always smiles.
trips over a lot
plays on motorbike (Not real)

P7310002.JPGWALT choose words that give the reader a vivid picture in their head
Purpose: To Entertain
Text Type: Character Description
My Writing Goal: Use paragraphs accurately.
Success Criteria:
  • Shows physical description
  • Shows character traits and actions
  • Organised into correct sentences and paragraphs - intro / physical / traits / actions / ending
  • Strong nouns, verbs and adjectives
  • Uses a good simile and can use other language features effectively
  • Has an entertaining anecdote (little story that happened) about the character


Ethan’s blue eyes twinkle with a bit of deviousness. He wears jackets quite a lot.

When he walks around he will trip over and not cry. He is the Cutest of cute. He is a great friend when you are crying he will come and give you a big hug. He likes running around. He is generous because once he gave me a lollie. He comes to my cricket games and cheers me on.

He plays on his motor bike (not real) and likes trying to do wheelies. He does not watch where he is going and that leads to him falling over but still not crying. He likes saying “Hi” to everyone and gives a big smile.

My cousin is one of a kind. It’s fun to have a cousin like him.

by James


  1. Hi James. Love your sharing about Ethan. You are an awesome big cousin for Ethan and I know that he loves being with you.

  2. Wow a lovely piece of writing!!! Some lovely character traits you found in your cousin. He loves being around his big cousins too as they're lots of fun. Keep up the good work James.

  3. hi james,
    I like the way that you said everything good about Ethan
    nice job james I can't way't for your next blog post,
    what are the bad thing? :-) ;-) have a nice day james,
    from Nathan.