Broken

This device (phone) is broken.

Write about a time you broke something!

OR

Imagine that you broke your device or phone and describe how it happened.

WALT use different sentence starters and lengths.

To do this, I will try to:

• Start sentences with different words
• Start sentences with capital letters
• Use other punctuation (check the ladder)
• Show my feelings
• Use my senses to describe
• Include strong verbs

BROKEN

I sprinted down a big long hall in the mall, clutching my Uncle’s new phone in my right hand and some birthday wrapper in my left. I had to get it to my Uncle's house for his birthday. I sprinted home. When I got there I opened the door and ran inside. I jumped on my bed and started wrapping up the new phone. When I had got to his house, I came in the gate, opened the door, then the other door and tripped up  on to the wooden hardwood floor. Ouch! I said and hop up rubbing my head but the cell phone had dropped and SMASH!!!! The cell phone had cracked. 
“Great gotta buy another one.”